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Power Point :

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You handled the transitions between speakers well, but some presenters read or learned by heart, and the whole presentation was too long.
 * Communication**

Some errors in English, otherwise design is fine.
 * Slides**

 A well-designed presentation, but much too long. You spoke for over 20 minutes! 
 * Content**

__Pierre-Emmanuel__ Don't read - it's very hard to understand what you are saying. It was better when you stopped reading, but there are still some parts which are unintelligible

disturbances > dis-tur-ban-ces (last syllable sez) quote > kw

__Caroline (slide 3)__ You tried to explain some complicated things - it was a little difficult to follow because you seemed to have learned your text by heart instead of trying to communicate information to us. Good attempt to include audience at the end.

united > you-naight-id (middle syllable like I, I am) ninth > ay like I developing > deVEloping basic > first syllable e like may milestone > 'mile'stone according the Maya > according to the Maya

__Morgane (slide 7)__ Very good delivery; intonation and fluency excellent

the NASA's scientists > NASA scientists we'll see what are they > what they are alignment > ay like I theories on the opposite side > opposing theories paradoxal > paradoxical what the governments will do > what will the governments do? keep in secret > keep secret

__Anais__ You speak quite slowly, but very clearly. You are easy to understand.

threat > sounds like bet encourage > not u like you information is being fed up with public > information is fed to the public hiding > Hiding (not iding) evidence (not Hevidence) on the one part > on the one hand money > first vowel sounds like duck

__Pierre-Emmanuel__ You sound better towards the end - more fluent and more dynamic, but still as though you are reciting a lesson, rather than trying to communicate with us.

viral > first vowel like ai (I, eye) spite > same vowel DE-BUNKers U-EF-OS X > ex idea > i-de-av video > first vowel like bid, hid